grr. im starting to not like kiyoshi...but i do like adam...max is kinda annoying and jeffrey is not that standing out so hes just himself. but pretty good. i like faith and how you developed her character

heh. i already read chap.4, but the review box just don't show up. Anyway, I think this story is really good! There is nothing confusing to me that I can think of, and overall, I think you are a really good author/writer. Just keep writing! Please. Please!

i can't wait for the action...kiyoshi's a pretty mean guy. i'm definitely not liking him...
update asap

update soon

so cute! . Please oh please update! Bye bye!

~charm

Oh c'mon! Are you telling me your not gonna update? PLEASE! i'm dyin' here! I wanna know what happens next...

wait just a second. what happened to you? did something happen and your amr got cut off? what happens next? are you just going to leave it there? are you having some horrible mind block that won't let you do anything? were YOU a freshman when you wrote this? and why does Kiyoshi act like someone shoved a # up his ?

SO MANY QUESTIONS AND NOTHING TO ANSWER THEM WITH?

Hey, the story is great so far. I love that a woman is in charge here. But I have two suggestions, or comments.

I don't like the titles of the chapters so far, the 'two guys' and 'another guy' or something...I think it is kinda of bland.

And second...I think there should be more about Faith's family and friend Mandy. It seems that she's been gone for a long time and she missed them so much in the beginning but then there is no mention of them.

So, okay...that's all for now. :)

WOW! This is an amazing story! I LOVE it! I like Max, he's cool. And Adam adds to the mystery of the whole story! Great job and can't wait to read more!

Nice story so far. Great admirer of your stories, indeed I am. Like how you put realistic people in. People who are your...acquaintances to say, but still insult/degrade you. Nice job.

Please continue! (_) Interesting fic!

amazing story! update ASAP, i can't wait! :)

OOh! I like this a lot! It's really good! Keep up the good work! Bye!

's all very realistic. I definitely enjoyed reading it. The grammar/spelling/all that sort of thing seemed errorless (which is mighty impressive), and everything flowed together very nicely. I like your .all that jazz. It really is very creative.

I like Adam. A lot. I think I'm a sucker for the silent mysterious type. However, Max is appealing because he's so nice to Faith, and his name is . Kiyoshi, however, is a jerk. Blech. Meanie. Like Gregory. *growls* But Jeffrey is so cute! In a very shy, modest sort of fashion. You have very well rounded characters that stay out of stereotypical profiles which is a nice change :D

And the idea is completely genius in all-boy genius school. Honestly, that would be so difficult to write about. But you sound as if you know exactly how things would .

Anyway, I'll stop rambling now, you are a very talented author, and i'll be hoping for an update! Soon, even. Kudos!

This is very good so far! I can't wait for you to update! I wish I was a girl genius that could go to a school with all . Thanks! Now you're putting ideas in my head! lol. This is great, again, and I'll be !

Mandi