Reviews for One of the Guys |
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tigs chapter 4 . 2/20/2003 this story is truely original i am really enjoying it please update as soon as possible |
C. N. Sweatt chapter 4 . 1/10/2003 Yeah! I love this story! I hope Faith kicks everyone's arse in the cross-country! Show em who's boss! UPDATE SOON! |
u-know-who formerly known as sak chapter 4 . 1/7/2003 wowieeee! totally interesting! sooo if i waz at a school with hunks left and right, i dont think i would survive! so what is up with Kiyoshi? and why is he so cold to everyone? and i think faith likes adam... woooo. and i think mark likes faith, am i right or what? ok then, pllllz update ! |
PrincessLesse chapter 4 . 1/6/2003 Well, I like the over-all plot so far, but I'd be a bit taken a back by the fact there were no other girls except for the teachers. I know that this is supposed to be a school for the genius, and if they *truly* didn't want her in, they shouldn't have accepted her. As well as the fact that she (the headmistress) berated Faith for not actually knowing where everything was right off the bat. Anywhoo... I think this story will turn out wonderfullly, the plot is still to be more developed, and I've suddenly gotten a yen for Adam. As well as Jeffrey, but only because he's British. _~ So, whenever you can, please, do continue on. I'd love to see where everything is going from here. Cheers! |
mistaken identity chapter 4 . 1/5/2003 Not a bore at all missy. I'm glad she told Adam off like that she was only trying to be nice for goodness sakes! Well i'm glad you updated. Chris _ |
Venus725 chapter 4 . 12/23/2002 so far i'm liking it. this story has great potential, and a very original, well thought out idea. very good. i give you applause. *applause* ciao! write more soon please! *venus725* ps. finally she stood up to him! i hate boys who put down girls like that! |
00010101010101010 chapter 4 . 12/21/2002 Nah, this isn't boring. That chap wasn't useless-in fsact, it showed lotsa show on each character, telling us more of them. Very good! I was so afraid you wouldn't update soon! I love each character: they're all cool in their own way, and that's good. I love this story! My sis is begging me to play cards with them, but it will be their problem for dragging me into the game while I'm in that cloud when I just read a fantastic story and is marvelling about it in my head so much that I'm not in the normal world but a world with everyone always praising YOUR story and I can rant all day long...! Thank you soo much for upating! I seeemply love your story so you should continue very soon! |
00010101010101010 chapter 3 . 12/10/2002 This is-excellent! Now, not all Canadians may be mysterious. I'm certainly not! I'm...weird. Anyways-wait, is this the last chap? No! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I SOOOOO love this story! I have to see what happens! Gawd, this is such a good story! You have to continue! Or I'll track you down and make you continue! |
00010101010101010 chapter 2 . 12/10/2002 Max has a serious problem with calling girls babies and such. I'd instantly try to slap him in the face, but I'm evil. Anyways, I love this! |
00010101010101010 chapter 1 . 12/10/2002 I really like this already! Very realistic characteristics, if you're thinking of stopping this, think again! |
neale chapter 3 . 12/3/2002 really cool story! please finish it! plz! |
Blazing-moon chapter 3 . 11/4/2002 Woo! I'm from Canada! Now...if only there were some Adams up here...mwehehe...well, I actually know a pretty good-looking Adam, but he's silly and funny in an un-mysterious way, and has brown eyes...nice brown eyes though...:) :) :) YAY! More Adam in this chapter :) Max is such an idiot..but a cool idiot! Please continue! -Blaze |
Venus725 chapter 3 . 11/4/2002 this was good. i really liked it. hmmm...makes me wonder whats with this adam character. i like max, he's nice. jeffrey too. don't know about kiyoshi dude, he seems like he doesn't like faith very much. i know he doesn't like max too much. hmmm...i'm very intriguied. anyways, write more as soon as you can! ciao! *venus725* |
mistaken identity chapter 3 . 11/3/2002 Hiyas good as usual! |
Blazing-moon chapter 2 . 11/1/2002 Yay! Second chapter! i like max...but as per usual, the guy I see first, I like better...so I'm still liking Adam better ) Plus he's just more...suave...and althletes aren't usually my type :) Whee. Anyway, I like Adam. Update soon! -Blaze |