Wow, this was very deep. Some people in the world are so sick. I have very little respect for the human race sometimes, and it simply amazes me when someone actually cares. I loved this-great beginning, great middle, great ending. It was just awing and powerful. Great job, this is so great I have no critiques. And coming from someone who almost critiques everyone on everything, that really means something.

I really like this. I love the charecters personality. This really is great.

Oh, my, thatw as really really good! You really have a talent for writing, and i hope you are considering a creer in writing someday. It really would get you filthy stinkng rich!

~nuha

This is absolutely amazing. Very thought-provoking.

Hey! Thank you for your review. I feel all warm inside.

Anyway. I love the details in your story, and the idea is really interesting. :) I wouldn't've thought of it... and I thought I was a creative person... *sob* But, out of curiosity, might some of your stories be connected, in a way? Actually, more of just being in the same town. I recognized the ex-girlfriend story from RainFall (I haven't finished it yet, which is why I haven't reviewed... if you were wondering ), and got curious.

I love your writing style, and I know I'll be reading more of your stuff. :) Just so you know, I've put you on my Favorite Authors list, so now you can feel all warm too. LoL. Talk to ya later~

~Jessica Night~

Wow... o.o

one of the best ive ever read! absolutly amazing work!

wow.

You have a great style of writing. This story is especially gripping. I can't wait untill I can read more of them! Keep up the wonderful work.

Absolutely excellent story, very enjoyable.

Oh- i disagree with another reviewer. No name for this guy is absolutely perfect, don't change that.

You did a wonderful job. It was cynical in a very "keep on reading" way. It sounds like it could be written into a screenplay. Very original.

One word:Wow

A really great story!

How very unnerving. The detail in this piece is absolutely exquisite, though I would've liked to see more about what he saw in his own eyes. And I would've liked for him to have a name. Thank you for sharing this piece.

Wow. That is truly amazing. Great story! And keep writing more. I love your style.