Reviews for Angel's Wings
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Really like the rhyming structure of this :) And you work the story aspect into it so well.

Do you not regret sacrificing

The freedom with which you were blessed

For this striking beauty

But skin-deep glory

You begged for and now possess?

-one of my favourite parts ]
Wiggity Wam chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
wow...phenomenal...absolutely brilliant. what more can i say.
Mishikaiya chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
Hi. The only word that can leave my mouth about this poem is "wow". I loved it. The way you described things, the rhyming, the questions. It really can speak to a person, you know?
Enits'ju chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. I absolutly loved it
Holy Soldier chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
Nice. At first thought you were talking about an angel but then I saw it warp to a statue of an angel. I always had the same questions about angels if when they cried what did it mean?
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
This is a beautiful poem with a great rhyme pattern. Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
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Whitesiren chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
lOve your poem. Nice words and description.