Words cannot express, how this poem makes me feel

You really do keep life so very real

Torment and anger, bloody limbs and fear

Your poetic talant, just seemed to appear

I bow to you, one poet to another

You are my best friend and my sister

So keep up the good work, your doing so well

Funny how i'm reviewing your poem with my poem, but for now... Farewell

Interestingly written, but cool. Nice job

-Jessie

Zara, you write very well, and I bow to it. I like the poem, it reminds me of what goes on in my head. No matter that in mine, its more dark than you would think.

You need huggles, too. ::Huggles for you!:: Thanks so much for putting me on your fav. authors. I really don't think I deserve it.

how...lovely