Hey man, it's been awhile. I just reread the whole saga from the first chapter. I noticed some mistakes in grammar, but I must say reading this again is so enjoyable. I noticed a lot more details! I hadn't realized the ANS Hydra was in both stories. Anyway I'm reinspired to write again, so i just wanted to say thanks for writing this, it's (still) great!

okay, I'll comment as I progress with the story so I don't forget. First, I skipped over the first chapter because I didn't deem it important. Many people like me, read sci-fi for an escape from reality. And having that synopsis that contained some real themes (if not real events) takes away from that escape.

The only peeve I had with the second chapter was how you didn't describe the appearance of your characters. You did a great job setting the stage of the battle, but you lacked in the descriptions of the characters. In my opinion, I feel that every character introduced needs a physical description, no matter how long they are in the story.

With those things mentioned concidered, I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Rereading more. Still excellent. Just wanted to point out that starships don't displace tons, because they're not in water-nothing to displace. "Mass" would be better.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

Decided to reread this in my spare time, and all I can say is... wow. Epic battles, a cast of dozens... this story is everything I remember and more.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

My reveiw wasn't very detailed last time (I was in a big hurry) so I'd like to make it up with this reveiw, which will hopefully be more informative: I really liked your attention to detail. Although it was a bit confusing (probably due to my lack of backround information) I find it exciting so far. Well, on to the next chapter!...

I really liked this chapter

Firstly, I would thank you for reviewing my 'hillbilly' fighter pilot story,The Battle of Britain, which eventually lead to your Arcadian Conflict. The arcadian Conflict is an incomparable story to mine, in which Arcadian conflict posess more humane drama rather than killing and dying of war. Your Arcadian is damn good compared to mine and also enriched with current battle situation and also political battle of wits.

Wow. One of the best if not the best story on fiction press; I've read books that are not as good. You should really try to get this published, I'd buy a copy. All I can say is keep up the good work and continue the adventures Alvin, the amazons, and of course, Arcadia!
- The red one

Being half way through the story, I thought I should review again. A sad turn of events when Scrivani died (not that I liked her that much.) I liked the confrontion at the funeral,but man, Burness is a bitch! Well that's all for now!
- The red one

I'm really liking how this story is developing. Lots of conflicts between charcters, It adds to the realism of the story. I can't wait to see how this turns out. I'll get back to reading now;you have a devoted reader in me!
- The red one
p.s. thanks for taking the time to email me.

I'm suprised I've overlooked this story for so long, so let me start by commenting on the introduction. I find it very detailed and intresting, and know I will continue.
- The red one
p.s. i'm working on a military sci-fi myself and would like you to review it when it's up. Thanks in advance!

just finished chapter 26, and so far i really enjoyedit. how ever, it seems to be a play on the usa-ussr cold war. but sill quite good. keep writting.

Nice intro. The wording in the last sentence is a little redundant.

intriguing, very, i like the set up of this. i look forward to reading this.

excellent prolouge. just a few problems.
when u switched from the rear admiral to the fighter jocks, i was really confused at first becuase you had nothing signifying that you were switching views. same with when you switch from the fighter jocks to their commander
did u get superdreadnoughts from Mbwun or did you think of it seperately. your other ship catagories are used by everyone all the time so those dont matter but ive only ever seen superdreadnoughts used by Mbwun and now you.
this isn't really a problem but wouldnt the Arcanians mostly speak the same language since they all had orgins in a united earth and if earth was united i would think they would have standardized the language. doesnt really matter but i was just wondering
when you say the cruisers wink out of existence is sounds as if theyre being destroyed. just think that a better phrase couldve been used but like the language thing it doesnt really matter.
i have to go for now but ill be back later (hopefully this weekend) to read more. it's really good so far so i cant wait.