I like it.
The last line of the first stanza doesn't seem to fit though. I mean, when I read it ,It seemed to be flowing quite nicely but then I hit "at the top of their lungs" and it was sort of like a "reading stumble". I don't know If my explanation will make sense but that's just how I felt about it. Other than that, it is a very nice poem.

very nice, the second stanza was much better. The imagry and metaphors are nice.

Nice, it flowed very well. Symbolicness is spiffy!

Usa-hime