Reviews for Sometimes
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
Wow, this was really excellent. I hope this is written from the heart because I know exactly how you feel.

I kind of like the first paragraph better, though. I think the second takes away from the peaceful feel of the poem and the ending doesn't quite seem adequate for this poem.
Mythica chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
hey, i realized someone had added me to their fave authors list, and upon reading some of your work I felt quite honored. _ This poem, in particular, i feel is a great beginning. your closeness with the earth and the rain is beautiful. don't be afraid to elaborate!

~Mythica
Lux's Confusion chapter 1 . 12/12/2002
this is beautiful! i love the imagrey you used here, i liked the concept laying in the ground yet feeling the changing elements too.

-Jasmine
The Lady of Shallott chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
Ohhh, that sounds so peaceful! Beautiful writing, 'panther'.
AgentSkulder chapter 1 . 11/21/2002
I likes! Simple yet delineates the desire for rest wonderfully. I can relate completely. Good job! D
Mystikat chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
This is wonderful!

Very relaxing and calm, you should write more of these!

Great job!
Catherine1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2002
perty! can picture a flowery field... :) ahhh, bliss *g* definatly sums up 'life'. :D