Reviews for A Thief in the Night
Twilight Moon chapter 2 . 12/22/2002
Wow. This is an amazing story, every piece of it just blows me away. I wish I had more time to finish, but rest assured, as soon as I can I will be back. This is great, I love your style and the plot itself if masterful. Great job, and keep it up!
AerinBrown chapter 10 . 12/21/2002
Great chapter. Can't wait for more of Egen! :)
XxShadowxX chapter 10 . 12/21/2002
Wow, you have AMAZING writing skills, I am working on a story myself, I haven't actually started it yet but I am like right now, I might post it here though. This is amazing work! Please contiune...
Sharia Sully chapter 1 . 12/21/2002
Whoa, you've really got me interested here. You discrips are vivid-i love it! And Malya's characterization is wonderful! I love strong characters. So whats going on with this infamous "him" you keep referring to? hmmmm **strokes chin thoughtfully** i'll read more as soon as i get a chance.

freedman121 chapter 2 . 12/19/2002
People have probably told you already, but just in case: italic is: and to end it, But there is no space between those things. Just:
freedman121 chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
I like the prospect of the guards being so big. Cool name... Malya.. I like it!
CCLybi chapter 9 . 12/9/2002
aww, so sorry about your many projects, i almost forgot what happened because you took so long to update(not like its your fault) but luckily, i remembered. so post more soon! it so much fun
AerinBrown chapter 9 . 12/6/2002
New chapter! Kathyn and Kestarl very mysterious. Wonder who they are. Good work. Me apparently cavewomen. *giggles* Great job!
Twisted Rose chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
Aww, how touching. Well, hope to see the next chapter soon.

(-)Twisted Rose
ElvenGirl chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
That was really good, i like the hole thing please send me more and contact me when you add more thanks.
CCLybi chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
how fun, but isn't the story focused on mayla? oh well, please post more soon! it seems so much fun
AerinBrown chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
Ooo...that queen is eeevil. How come (I know, bad grammar) Eric didn't go with Jade? Great chapter; you write so well! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work!
Melted Crayons chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
oh no! i just found a mistake. I said he had blue, then green eyes. Im not sure which to make him have. You pick the color.
AerinBrown chapter 7 . 11/12/2002
Egan to the rescue! hehe...I like him. Cool chapter. Can't wait for the next!
Abinikai chapter 7 . 11/12/2002
Hey good job. I'm not sure where the mistake is, when I read stories I just make little marks in my head if there is a misspelling or a word left out. If it's big, I usually put it in the review, but you probably won't see anything like that. You do a good job checking over your chapters.

You also do a good job "painting a picture" in my head of what's going on in the story. Not many people have that talent, and you definately do. All I have to say is keep up the good work, and please, POST SOON!
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