Reviews for A Thief in the Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sao: Ooh, that had to hurt. HOS: Does he die? That noble guy, Zathe? I hope he dies. Sao: That's my other self. Oh, and don't cut back on the sugar! Sugar is good! HOS: She should know, she consumes tons upon tons of it everyday. Sao: *hiding a bag of sugar behind her back* Ignore her, she's lying. And it's okay if it gets weird a little later. Going to the next chappie now! ~Sao & HOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is an amazing story, every piece of it just blows me away. I wish I had more time to finish, but rest assured, as soon as I can I will be back. This is great, I love your style and the plot itself if masterful. Great job, and keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Can't wait for more of Egen! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you have AMAZING writing skills, I am working on a story myself, I haven't actually started it yet but I am like right now, I might post it here though. This is amazing work! Please contiune... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, you've really got me interested here. You discrips are vivid-i love it! And Malya's characterization is wonderful! I love strong characters. So whats going on with this infamous "him" you keep referring to? hmmmm **strokes chin thoughtfully** i'll read more as soon as i get a chance. *~Sully~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() People have probably told you already, but just in case: italic is: and to end it, But there is no space between those things. Just: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the prospect of the guards being so big. Cool name... Malya.. I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, so sorry about your many projects, i almost forgot what happened because you took so long to update(not like its your fault) but luckily, i remembered. so post more soon! it so much fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() New chapter! Kathyn and Kestarl very mysterious. Wonder who they are. Good work. Me apparently cavewomen. *giggles* Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, how touching. Well, hope to see the next chapter soon. (-)Twisted Rose |
![]() ![]() That was really good, i like the hole thing please send me more and contact me when you add more thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how fun, but isn't the story focused on mayla? oh well, please post more soon! it seems so much fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo...that queen is eeevil. How come (I know, bad grammar) Eric didn't go with Jade? Great chapter; you write so well! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no! i just found a mistake. I said he had blue, then green eyes. Im not sure which to make him have. You pick the color. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Egan to the rescue! hehe...I like him. Cool chapter. Can't wait for the next! |