Reviews for Blind Man's Bluff
TheatrePhunk chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
That was wonderful. I truly loved it. It's a nice metaphor, and I think I'll have my friends read it. Nice work!
Aldinach Vampire chapter 1 . 4/14/2003
very good yet very sad I hope u write an epilogue or something. Great writing
Imaginatrix chapter 1 . 11/1/2002
wow. absolutely great.
M. Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 10/31/2002
Ok I have to admit that was a damned good story. You need to work on a few details like the layout. I noticed in your other story it wasn’t quite right. Yeah yeah, I seem to yell at a lot of people for that but the layout is very important. It’s the first impression people get of your story and people judge by looks as we all know. I’d be happy to help, just don’t ask for spell checking :). You need to do something about the jump from first to third person add something like 'he thought'. As well as a few parts in the dialog where there isn’t a he said or she said at the end. It’s ok to drop that occasionally but not too often.

Keep up the good work! Your one of the few good werewolf writers I’ve read. Even better than the White Wolf books I’ve read. Maybe you can even get published one day. This short story if cleaned up I’m sure could go places.