Reviews for Why?
Keree chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
That hits home. Lately I've really been feeling like that.
Luna Turner chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
I think that this is a piece that I can really tell came from the heart.

It's also very relatable, seeing as many people feel the same way.

I wish I could criticize, but you know.

~Luna Turner
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I liked how the first stanza gave off the character's well-off background.

[when no one is hurting me?Why do I feel like this?]

You're missing a space between the sentences.

I liked how you built it all up until the fatal, literally, conclusion. It made the ending that much more stronger.

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May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
i'm glad things have gotten better for you now. I remember feeling similiar to this myself before I had memories of my childhood. Good poem. Sad though. Relateable.
S. Valle chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
wow thats really deep.

i like it tho cuz sumtimes thats how i feel.

good job
blue-dan chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
You can tell this has been written from the heart and soul, and it reaches out, grabs you and reminds you (me at least, and a lot of other people I suspect) of times when we asked ourselves exactly the same questions. Even if it's some of your earliest work (2002!), it's truly amazing, you are a very gifted writer, so don't ever stop writing!
lymli chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I have these questions too, maybe I had some feeling like that, to be honest this poem is pretty hopeless.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Wow. You've definitely captured that feeling of hopelessness that often accompanies depression and suicide.
Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
I like this poem a how you end it..it's wonderful!..Kind of reminds me of when I use to ask why just to annoy my mom haha :P.
collypollyy chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
I used to have those feelings too... so i can relate to this...

good poem

Happy Holidays!
lordelfy chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Wow last two lines really sum it up. I like how you look at both views; the one from the inside how they feel, and the one that the people around see. great poem!
confused being99 chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
hey, i know this is one of ur earlier poems but wtvr i was just browsing. it like seriously sums up my life right now i hav so much going for me but at the end up the day i go hide somewhere n just cry n i hav no idea why... wtvr , good stuff
Betrayal-of-innocence chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
completly depressing. that's my kinda style, I like it.
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
aw...this is a great poem, nd beautiful formatting...

im sorry it had to hurt so much wen you wrote this...

much LUB~kerr~
morbidme chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
omg this is such a good poem and i wish i could answer all of your qeustions awesome poems keep on writing
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