that is good even though it is short. sometimes the best things are short. this makes sense and is very creative and deep...i like it

That was really good I've tryed to write poems befor but there scary... 0.0! Hay don't forget to finish that manga of me and Jesica LOL Its soo funny! And thax for the pic of D-chan! Its cool!

U should really put up more, this is a really short angst poem but very good! Write more.

Very unique and interesting. The first line is cleverly true. Very strong and sorrowful for the next few lines. And then caught, stuck, smothered by 'thick mass/of depression'.

Well written.

very good! keep up with the good work! :)

Yes, this is quite good, please post more! It also seems like there is more to this poem in particular...is there?