Reviews for Wings
MadMorrow chapter 1 . 4/1/2003
Each line of this poem seems to be uplifting, the speaker feels the glory and freedom of flight with each line...until the last one. That last line brings the speaker down with a crash, it's spoken softly and sadly...a trace of bitterness.

Great poem.
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 2/21/2003
I could relate to this somehow. If only I had a pair of wings.
KrysSaiyan chapter 1 . 11/9/2002
QuillKitten chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
That last line is the real stinger. You wish and imagine the writer doing all these things and then at the end the dream of it is all taken away. Genius bit of work there. Come over to my little niche sometime.