Nh. couldn't help but 'view again.

I like the rhyming of this, but you sort of loose out on it later...although maybe you didn't mean for it to rhyme.

Well, the imagery was good.

-Dice

This makes me think of a Slytherin child who doesn't want to be Slytherin, or a drow child in Menzoberranzan who hates the ways of the dark elves.

crap.