|Reviews for Second in Line|
| AaZz chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
| Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 11/10/2002
I'm not sure what to say about this one, but I really liked it a lot. The sentences were all merged and kept changing until it just all broke down in agony. The way you write is really expressive, I can tell you put a heck of a lot of effort into all this. :) I don't have anything negative to say about this, I don't think. o_O Just awesome material through and through. Thanks for posting; I think I'll stick this in with my favorites! ~MJ
| RyKnOw Starfuct sic chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
damn girl, your dripping venom here...and I love it...keep it up
| Impressionist chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
I want to...kill him. crucify...crucify...I'm sorry. that's not called for. but this is so well written.
"Can you take it all away...explain all this to me..."