Reviews for Echoes of Laughter
kamikaze899 chapter 32 . 10/18/2003
yey! you finally updated! i really liked this, awesome style. i liked the whole mood of it. last part was esp great! keep it up!

ps. tnx for the review! _

Isay chapter 26 . 4/29/2003
Very nice! It makes me feel all warm and happy... _

Isay chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Very depressing, in a way. Nice style!

kamikaze899 chapter 31 . 3/25/2003
though i'm a neutral to both things, there is some truth in your poem. i really don't see the need for countries to fight like that. innocent lives can definitely be lost. great imagery, i especially liked "But the bloody splash of battle

Blinds the wisest man" Keep Writing!

btw, thanks for all your wonderful reviews
kamikaze899 chapter 27 . 2/1/2003
really really nice! pls. update soon, k?
kamikaze899 chapter 4 . 2/1/2003
i could sort of relate to this one, and not just the poem, but the a/n too! hehehe... you've got talent, and i mean it! ganbatte yo
kamikaze899 chapter 3 . 2/1/2003
the ending's not bad, it fits the poem quite well
kamikaze899 chapter 15 . 2/1/2003
i like how you write poems relating to the real world, like wars and stuff. good job!
kamikaze899 chapter 20 . 2/1/2003
i really like this one! keep it up
Rogue Angel Barton chapter 4 . 1/31/2003
Wow. You are very pessimistic. Oh btw, this is Yini. But this is so very true. Children forced to grow up too fast, innocence lost.
kamikaze899 chapter 30 . 1/30/2003
another masterpiece! so.. did you ever find out what that dream means? sounds like its very meaningful. btw, keep writing, and if you've got the time, pls. review my works

- fr. someone really pleased to find another great poet who is almost the same age as her..
kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 1/30/2003
sugoi desu ne! nice poem. since our internet is quite SLOW at the moment, i'm a bit lazy to review all of your poems RIGHT NOW [take note: RIGHT NOW] but since i really liked your poem, i decided to review. keep up the good work..
Aohlau chapter 27 . 1/20/2003
Sniff...Sniff...Oh man these are great! I'm almost cried!Seriously!

And I can relate to some of these poems...

Espically the 'Lonely River' poem you wrote!

Are ya gonna write more?::Whap!::OW! Guider!

Guider:-_-;;; ::Holding an anime mallet::

Mind her but she is really into ANGSTY Poem Genres.::Whap!::

Aohlau: ::Holding a bigger mallet::It's a good thing these things are rubber! Anyway I hope there's going to be more of this!::Whacks Guider again::


Aohlau: ::Cackles::
randy chapter 1 . 12/9/2002
visually very vivid


and beautiful, in a peaceful way (ignoring the fact that it was written after 9.11.01

all in all, nice; I liked it
VT2Dancougar chapter 18 . 11/26/2002
Your poetry is pretty good, I say.
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