|Reviews for Enjoy the Silence|
| Lydia Cethin chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
This story had a rather "raw" ending for me, if you will. Its not that it seems incomplete or poorly written, but more like it was meant to be a cliffhanger, of some sort.
(Laughs) I can see that you like the phrase "Burn my pockets." Having a consistent phrase that you use in most of your stories can help readers identify your works, as well as your writing style.
So far, most of your works have been very tragic. I'll keep reading to see how your writing does over the next 33 stories or so.
| DarkWinterDreamer chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
This was simply amazing. It really makes one think. Thats not something that can easily be done. You have a gift. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing, and happy anniversary.
| indigogoldfish chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
hey..nice story as usual. amazed by how well u can write. X so sad.. sigh.
| miya wada chapter 1 . 11/15/2002
you're wrong if you were describing yourself in this story. i know im being pc (and i loathe it), but then you can just cling on to any drifting log and just hang out with that person, right? besides, you have cq and silverg3r too. this is a beautiful fic with some philosophies i really like (and intend to use, although right now i cant remember it. coz my mind only has two philosophies drilled by miya the great. you might want to use them though: tsuyokereba iki, yowakereba shinu. the strong lives, the weak dies. and the [broken] world is made up of individuals. broken is i add myself coz of lyrics of some song)
nice fic. really thinks it refers to you, since you dont really talk at all in class. try to talk more lar, although i notice sometimes you can talk a lot. so contd talking lot lot lots lor, k? dont you think that zach will feel hurt?
| gniq chapter 1 . 11/9/2002
hmm...u noe smth? i really wan to thank u for writing this story, it makes me have more faith in my religion. aniwae, another great one. Duh. Can really feel the hurt of the main character. and yar, basically it rox. and nO, i dun agree "once an outcast, always an outcast." and yes, u can make a difference in your life.
ahhhh... wonder how u write so well. continue man.. FantaStic jOb.
| JoC chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
U always write such depressing stuff :( but it's gd lahz (as usual) ...
the sch juz dun appreciate this form of writing lohz... u can get a million great review n the teachers would still say no gd or no sense or wateva crap...
tis story is a reflection of wat u feel izzit? can c part of ur feelings in it... depressin stuff... haiz...
| silverg3r chapter 1 . 11/6/2002
sighz. so sad...sigh. but i love it.
sometimes i wish i was deaf, i can't hear what pple say...
but i guess i shouldn't wish like that. it might come true. and its folish to waste away, for me.
is the last sentence a reflection of your own feelings?
about changing destiny... i believe we can control what we want to do, but maybe even that action of controling is part of destiny. so its confusing to me... destiny. i really wanna noe what i want to be, what i am going to be...
if i had not joined band, i wouldn't be the person i would be now, because of the people i knew...
sad sad sad. ) oh no, 11.50. i'll read the rest after the o's tml! good luck too. go and study my brains out. u too! )
| Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
Very nice! Good grammar, nice flow...the characterization is great, as is the general feel of the story. It shows definite talent. Somewhat...angsty though. But then, I suppose that would makes sense. Anyway, great job, keep up the good work!