|Reviews for Life Goes On|
| RainShadow2005 chapter 1 . 3/3/2003
This one didn't seem to catch me as much as some of the others. Some things were a little unexplained, like who that Carlos guy was and how many people lived in that loft. And why everybody had this inner strife. It seemed to me that the characters were crying a lot. I think it'd make a better impression there was better description. Do you plan on continuing this? It does have potential.