Wonderful chapter, I'm glad you liked the few changes I did to it. Truely though there was not much that had to be done, but always glad to help . Keep up the excellent work. Peace.

Hey, I can't help it. You write awesome stories and you're my newest favorite author (I'm probably making you blush but you don't mind, I hope). Naturally, I'm gonna keep coming back to see more stuff from you. Once again, great chapter. I can't wait to see more. I started liking the moment you began the first chapter with that verse from Dylan Thomas' "Do Not Go Gentle Into that Good Night". I love that poem! Anyway, I better stop talking. Keep writing. I love this!~CT

I like this alot, glad you liked the few changes I made. Glad to help anytime. Keep up th the excellent work. Peace.

Oh you're welcome! I came earlier to read this but the second chapter wasn't up yet or something. Anyway, cool so far. Can't wait for the third. I'm putting you on my faves (and trust me, it's HARD to get on my faves! You have to be exceptionally good, which you are!) Thanks again for your advice. Keep writing.~CT

Very nice, very descriptive, and I for one, could find nothing wrong with it...I look into this one further...

Hmmm, still a good story the second time I read it. Btw, the real reason for my review is to thank you for your help. I do have a Writers Market but it's the 2000 version. And I've been published to but only once and it was a hard battle for me. Anyway, thank you once again and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Thank you for the wonderful reviews too. Later.~CT

Nice beginning! I look forward to more of this. Keep on writing.~CT