Great idea behind this one! I've actually wondered what my back looks like, because I filleted (sp?) when I was younger and I don't know if the scars are still there or not. (I'm odd, I know!)

The pool of my spin...spine? Hehe...

Yes , this very spot that we are never going to explore on our own body. It's interesting because only someone else has access to it, to smell,taste and view freely. I never thought of it that way but you are right. you are a real artist in the sense that you see what the world passes by without a thought.

*smiles and nods*

Uhu...

Heh heh, overal, cool poem,

but a bit confusing, I must say.

Are you saying your elbows taste like grass, lol?

I like the last four lines.

Somethoing to think about.

~ASD

i liked that part about the smile and the grin too, nice touch. i haven't tried licking my elbow yet... i am, of course, kidding.

very good :)

I like that 'innocent smile, hurting grin' part. Reminds me of my own.

i don't get it and i'll try to change the i am an american poem somehow ok? -

please put more stuff up and R&R my fics

Yes, a nice little mash of things. Well done, I liked it a lot.~CT

Interesting little hodge-podge. Cute -.