Maybe I don't like Sunday cause I feel like it's too realistic. What a person would feel. Maybe I don't like Sunday because she reminds me too much of everyone at my school. Maybe I don't like Sunday because she isn't perfect. I'm just gonna go wallow in my own disappointment for assuming. It's not your fault. Just mine. I don't know if I can read more. I might come back to this, but I think I can't read this. I'm sorry, like I said it's not your fault. It's mine. Your work is wonderful! I loved every second of it on certain chapters. I'll probably come back tomorrow to read/finish it XD Anywho, I love your character development. It's amazing. Each emotion you describe is amazing. I'm stunned at how well your writing is. Thank you for taking the time out of your schedule to write this. I hope wherever you are, you have a fantastic day! I hope more people see this and give it the reviews it deserves! I just hope this little review did enough good. Ok I think I said everything.
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Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! FORESHADOWING. It's right there in that little sentence. Something bad mojo jo is going to happen. I see what chu doing. "It's Funny how optimistic I was then, that I still believed I could make a difference."
or maybe I'm just overreacting. OOps. Anyway nice chappie, I still have uneasy feelings about this Sunday.

Still not liking her... :l But nice chappie, sending seeds of doubt across the world for all children to eat. Or something. Anywho not my favorite chappie but nonetheless pretty good! Keep it up.

Hmm...I still don't know about her... I'm gonna be so sad when I get disappointed. T.T Anywho kind of liked the chapter so keep writing or something.

Yep I can see this happening in real life. Hopefully before I have to go to school you don't leave me with a cliffie. Pft you ain't rubbish and evil, I think... XD Although this is already finished. oops. More and more I'm not liking Sunday's attitude but I get it. It just, :l Ok
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I came to tell you that you aren't for sure rubbish. Well atleast in my standards! I love how realistically put in doubt and questioning. I'm excited to know more, so I must go and consume you're story!
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Oh my, um, is this a crime? Oh well, I hate when this happens. WHEN YOU LIKE BOTH OF THE PROTAGONISTS choices if that's what you want to call it. Oh my god, I know why you chose this title now. You evil evil author. You're gonna make me depressed. Or even more XD Congrats on finishing it! The writing of this shall be remembered Forever! *Throws up confetti* Anywho I love how you wrote everything because whenever I try to, I don't like it. Good job!

Well this party's getting interesting. Loved how you made it, although I don't know who both of them are D: I don't watch a bunch of movies...Keep it up! I love every chappie you make!

No, no don't cry! *Pat pat* You're work is amazing and the words you use hook readers like me in T.T That's good! Just not for me, I guess.. Love how not rushed but actually moving you made this story. I know some stories and they're just super slow or they're too fast and it doesn't makes sense. Ok thanks for the chappie!
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Ok I'm adding you to my list of authors to kidnap. I swear I'll feed you and stuff . It's not that dark in my basement... c: Nice chapter I loved it and it's like nicotine to my system. If anyone asked I'll just say you convinced me to take drugs! XD Good work! Keep it up.

Wow the way you worded everything was just perfect! Thank you for putting your time and effort into this! Can't wait to see what happens next! (Hopefully you don't throw in the "PLOT TWIST BOMB" T.T I would be very sad. Anywho Toodles~

Wow I love your first chappie already! Therefore I already love you. XD

If maddie was a real character then she is a selfish self centred vampire who sucked Sunday in to a relationship and sucked the life out of her and made her give up her reputation by being seen with a dyke which Sunday was never comfortable with to begin could have been a popular girl at campus that she was and had a good chance of giving a good go at her course had she been in the right company ie. not a life sucking vampire dyke like maddie. We can understand why lesbians are often portrayed as vampires and vice verse. Per haps you can make a sequel to this and portray maddie as who she really is, a vampire who goes after her next bi or straight victim. I'm sorry if you think I'm being rude but this has been my personal experience and those of many other women I know with dykes. For completion they are also co dependent as seen in maddie and casey's relationship. Vampires can get off sucking each other too - still nothing like a non vampire ie. straight or bi

So is she staying with Sunday or breaking up ?

Definitely dyke drama. Very realistic dyke characteristic. The bisexual is usual emotionally mature and stable but once involved with a dyke -usually self loathing and irrational you get dyke drama