满好看的! I liked the comparison between the tears and the rain- it really helped the overall mood and tone of the piece. Great job!

really good ar!

good thing I learned some simplified chinese or I wouldnt have been able to read such a good story. more of a poetry.

but I can actually feel that this brings out. keep up the good work.

its really good! I love poems that connects the rain with loneliness - Update soon!

This is pretty good. I had to get my Grandma to read it for me. lol.

Wow, this is very good, I like how you connect love and the rain. Plus, it's sad, I love sad things.

Chen

Funny how it's raining right now as I read this poem. The rain really helped bring out the mood of the poem _ I liked this a lot, please keep writing!