I have never really been in this position or that of the sleeping girl, but that doesn't mean I can't relate. Gorgeous piece.

Hell. I'm spam reviewing today and favoriting everything I read. *stares* but dam, I'm not lucky enough; it seems. as if, you've stopped writing. _ ; haha..sad eh? I'm too late.

Wow. The angst is just so... delicious.

Ok. Maybe it’s not the right word to describe it, but yea. Amazing. Love it.

love your other work too.

Beautiful. Poignant. Well done. - A few areas need to be fleshed out, I think, and a few phrases need to be redone - the word-use is a little bit trite - but if you ever decide to re-edit I'm sure you'll catch all that.

wow...this is amazing! i love it! maybe because i can relate to it in parts and it was extremely well-written. good job!

*Is speechless*

Damn... I can relate to her so well! Very well written

good write. sad life.

Wow. This is just creepy. That girl has problems. Pretty cool though. I liked this. The writing could have been better, but it wasn't really all that bad. Some things could have been reworded better I think, but yeah. Good story. Very creepy.
Are we supposed to feel sorry for the narrator? If so, then you failed at that. I just simply think she's a very disturbed young girl. I don't feel sorry for her at all.

Nicely written. . very well done!

Excellent as always. Very angsty and extremely well written.

ahh sickeningly similar to how i feel sometimes. very very good story :(

oh god justKISS HER oh i love it im checking out your other stuff!

aaww that was sweet. You wrote it so well. Im gonna add it to my favourites.

Excellent, an absolutely powerful story. Definitely one of my favorites. _