Reviews for She's So Lucky |
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![]() ![]() "road trip we’d taken to celebrate graduation" Ha. That sounds a lot like a movie with Brittney Spears as a star in it, no? This chapter is "Drive Me Crazy". The next is "What You See Is What You Get". I have finally decide that you were thinking bout Brittney when you wrote this. Gr8 so far. |
![]() ![]() Bethney Starrs...sounds SO familiar...Britney Spears, perhaps? lol. gg finish reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kay. More now! Yay! But seriously, I really like it. It's quite entertaining thus far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, love it. completely. totally. you are now a favorite author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Write more soon, please. |
![]() ![]() Love the characterization of the siblings. I don't have any myself, but I've seen my friends have similar music battles with theirs. Also, the unique quirks of the family and friends were great |
![]() ![]() This is great. Love the "Britney" parody. And the standee, I know someone that used to talk to those as well XD Great story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() The interaction between Fuuyumi and Joanna here was particularly nice. I like how truly annoying you're able to write Fuuyumi; the fact that, in addition, you're able to turn her into a character with multiple personality facets is amazing. I enjoyed the drop-in visitors in this chapter, from the porcupine-type jerk with a soda to the Pepsi people. Again, very good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha... this is great. I love your attitude towards the pop "music." Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please write more. This is soooo much better than my original stories. (I've only posted one, cuz most of em suck) It's very good, and I love it. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this was just as nice as the first chapter- enjoyable, down-to-earth, and well-written. Your characters (particularly Joanna) are so real-life and relatable that they're really fun to read about. Good luck writing more; it will be very welcome, believe me. |
![]() ![]() *snicker* Bilbo the cat and the laundrey elves! Keep writing, can't wait for more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarous! Surprizingly true too. Sad ain't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Joanna and her family are entertaining. Love the conspiracy theory too. I hope you can keep up the lovely work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good... I'm looking forward to the next chapter... |