Hi!

Don't know if you still check back here, but I gotta say, I love this story!

I totally support LuckyxTomo!

Don't know why I'm writing this, it's probably one of the more random things to say, but it's 3AM here and I haven't slept...

Anyways, thanks for writing!

Dod! Funny funny. Shame it's on 'permanent hiatus'. Apart from the random letters instead of words thing you do, it was really cool.

lmao.
seriously.
this whole story.
mind if I use that if I get pulled over by a copper?
still
l-ing. m. a. o.
yup. let's go to the library.
ha.
Kam

*pats shoulder* We can dream of guys like Linx, sadly, if they have his personality, they are never hot, but usually greesy guys who look like they shower every two weeks.
*Shudder* eww...
Anyways, great chapter! Haha, I wonder if that works, sayin' you gotta' pee really bad. If I'm ever caught speeding (well, if I ever get my license) I'm trying that trick. "I've been sitting in traffic for so long and I really have to go to the bathroom!" see if it works..hehe...
I understand what you mean though, I like twists, but if the twist is "And he dies in the end" or something I'm always like "Wth? No!" or something. Especially when it's a romance fic and they kill the guy off-randomly too. I read a fic once where it was going to end happily and then the guy got run over by a car and the end. Odd.

...hahaha. Hahahaha... AHAHAHAHAHA! No, I really don't know. This one didn't have that much funny to it, sorry to say. I rather enjoyed Lucky's conversation with Tiff though, it was conversation that wasn't like, "Hey", "Yeah", "Doubleyou tee eff", "Uh huh". Nah, I'm kidding, I enjoyed this chapter a lot, but just not as much as the others. Japanese class must be taking a lot out of you.
Those two idiots(Linx and Lucky) teasing each other to pee out the window, that was some gold though.

Who! Return of Linx! My favorite, hot stuff yeah! Well, minus Mr. Fluffy...Now THAT's some hot stuff.
Haha, yeah, I don't really like stories where you can tell right off the bat who likes who, perhaps why I like Fruits Basket so much, 'cause darn, I have no clue who Tohru likes. Umm, anyways-yeah, I hope you've seen Furuba, or else you're probably like "Yeah, whatever". Heh, stories where the author tricks you into thinking it'll be "that guy" and switches it are great too, I had fun doing that in mine, haha.
I'll have to reread chapter 1 on B, shouldn't be too bad haha. Good times...I was probably so shocked you had updated a whole new story after waiting for a new chapter and reviewing them all that I wasn't paying attnetion, haha.
I love Tiff/Linx...Sadly...there is a memory of one shot, but it has been erased. They're awesome, hopefully...maybe...more...romance for them? Possibly...?
Somethn' fishy is goin' down here! Hmm...I wonder what it is...Cna't wait for second part!

"I quickly changed out of the rest of the school uniform, but keeping on my... fake.. girl goods... " Oh goodness, that made me laugh so hard. I've pondered many a time what Lucky's fake goods were made of(tissues? pads?), and still I don't know. This chapter was some funny shiznit, and I'll be damned if that "miracle" thing wasn't hilarious. You sense of humour is the greatest.
And for the record, Cricket DID do something. She lied about her room. And she's got the same room as Yutaka, ew. But, wait a second.. did Yutaka have the room to herself previously, or has Cricket always been there? THAT'S A CLIFFHANGER ITSELF! No!

Ah, the eyes boaring into Lucky, I have a feeling Cricket is evil now. xD Okay, the cricket/lucky thing is gone from my mind, but you know, it brings up the point that I really have no clue who I like pairing him up with. Certainly not Rika actually, she's too perfect, and I used to think Tomo...but err, no, and Emi has her moments, but they are few...and hmm. Gosh darnit, throw in some linx/tiff and I'll be happy *Shrug*
For the life of me I can't remember the ketchup in room incident, but I probably should, so do you by chance remember what chapter?
*Pokes back* Hey, that makes me feel lame, lol. xD Well, by chance it doesn't matter anymore~lol, since I'm not like that. I always cring when there is a new commer to anime like that. Makes you want to scream out "No! Don't go to the dark side!" or something.
Oh...new picture's up? Gotta' check it, I love your images. (Especially of Linx...m...boy-in-trench coat...m...)
xD Poor, Poor Lucky too. Shopping with EMI of all people. Ouch.

...damned Cricket! I'm telling ya she's evil, EVIL I say! I saw her being evil with my own two eyes. She was stealing candy from a baby the other day, and I had to stop her, so I broke the lollipop over her head. But since she's still using the shifty eyes, seems like she's okay. Damnit. I've gotta mess her up.
I see you've got some story here, well.. more story development than usual. It really took a fast forward here, since the last contact with Tiff was... a long while ago.
Shopping... with Emi? I hope she doesn't grope up on him and feel stuff she's not supposed to.
Emi: "AH! Lucky! What's THAT?" *points*
Lucky: "Uh.. er... um... Abdahdodah?"

;; But then, I guess I was technically a ghost reader for like, what? The entire first half of the story and most of the second? **dies** Have much love for the new chapter, you're up in the humor polls by 14 points. _ I'll be sure to check out your website, and please upload the new chapter soon! I skip the country for 5 months on the 1st of Sept, and then will be hanging on the edge of the proverbial cliff you love so much until I get back and read the end of this story. _

; Wow, my last review really sucked, being that it wasn't a review at all. More like... A statement of fact. And an obvious fact at that.
As for your love of cliffhangers... I can't say I share it! _ After all, teetering precariously on the edge of DOOM isn't exactly everyone's cup of tea. Not that I like tea either. Anyway, love the recent chap whether you think it's funny or not. Update again soon!

whoa tiff is so much like me. Other than the name -_- haha i couldnt swallow pills until i was 13 / and beating up my brother is one of my favorite past times...] well update soon

Waahh! Cliffhangers! Why did they exlope the bakery? Yukara is evil. Hmm..seems I've answered my own question...unless you are surprising...which you are...eep! Fun stories...

John... that's what I call myself, I say, John, what're you gonna write. You talk to this girl everytime she updates, but yet... you never get an idea of what to say. 'Great work' is too short, yet to go over EVERYTHING is too long.
Then I says to myself, "John, why the fuck are you calling yourself John, and why are you talking to yourself? Damned crazy person."
Gah, I wanna write, "Man, that's was so fucking awesome. I mean, Lucky was like whoa, and Cricket was like ergh, and then Tomo was like... wait.. Tomo wasn't in this one."
..can you blow Cricket up? Everytime I read about her(despite the uber cool roof scene) I feel annoyed. Maybe it's the fact that all the girls got all secretive. ..maybe.

Haha, yeah, looking back, I don't know what sparked the sudden Cricket/Lucky pairing, which is bad because after this chapter I think she's trying to do something to Rika w/ Yukari (at first I thought maybe Rika/Yukari/AND cricket were all in together on something. Until Rika pushed foward whatever it is...that is making me churn...o.o)
Possibly because I tend to think that their conversations are that type where "We don't speak, but I'm comfortable around her" which...isn't quite true for him, lol :/ Emi seems suspicious in this chapter too...Maybe it's me. (Which, judging from Cricket/Lucky, it probably is)
Lainie is taking, hm? I used to use "-chan" after my name too, I can remember it. "Ooh~konnichiwah" (yes, I spelt it like that) Kaika-chan desu~!" looking back. I should have just said "hey...I'm Kaika..." haha-it's hard to look back at myself, I think "How lame" xD
Hmm, Tomo just struck me as a suspect 'cause she's a cat and all. (No reason other than that, lol) But I'm glad it's cricket, 1 for me!~