|Reviews for Last Chance|
| Seira chapter 17 . 8/24/2003
yes, i know, i'm sorry, i uploaded the wrong one and it hasdn't updated yet...
check now, it's all better!
| umm chapter 17 . 8/24/2003
Isnt this the same chapter as chapter 15? I think maybe you uploaded the wrong thing by accident, or maybe ff is making mistakes or something. Sorry.
| MooMooMoo chapter 17 . 8/24/2003
wait a sec...im confused. isnt this an old chapter? or is this a flashback...?
| MooMooMoo chapter 16 . 8/24/2003
oy...why did seth say that? even tho he meant it in a good way, he should of said it in a nicer tone. eesh, sux to be eryn right now... :'( hope everything gets better!
| Ang3lL0v3 chapter 16 . 8/23/2003
This story is unbelievable beautiful . I hope one of each other will find happiness in a home.
keep up with the great work!
| umm chapter 16 . 8/23/2003
Oh! Suspense is a killer. How could he say that to her? Does he mean it? I hate him, ill hate him forever! Well, at least until he apologizes. But I hope she never takes him back. I hope she realizes she can be strong on her own. Oh well, either way.
| eee-vawn chapter 15 . 8/15/2003
Great so far update soon
| Lisa0211 chapter 15 . 8/15/2003
I was very happy when I returned from vacation and saw three new chapters...hehe. Yay! They were so good. I like how she is doing everything slowly and you aren't rushing everything like some people would. Great job. I love this story, even though I'm generally a very happy person. Hehe. You write very well and I'm enjoying this immensely. Write more soon. ~Lisa~
| MooMooMoo chapter 15 . 8/15/2003
wow...seth is so sweet...i really love your story! its angsty and its romantic...and a little dramatic. its really good. hmm...what is going to be in store for the future? (~_)? update soon!
| MooMooMoo chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
wtf? all the suspense...and it was all a dream...whoa..nice!
| Rei chapter 14 . 8/12/2003
Aww...so sweet. I'm looking forward to see the interaction with Eryn and her father in the future. What can I say, I'm a stickler for revenge .
| Hex Reedglimmer chapter 14 . 8/12/2003
Continue, PLEASE! This is so good. And you, are such an awesome writer. I envy you...
You're really good at expressing your characters feelings, and making the reader feel them, too. You don't have too much of anything, nor too little. The romance is really sweet, and you really seem to understand what it's like, to be in this kind of situation. Most people can only do this when they are writing about themselves, or a close friend or family member. Something they've at least partly been through. JUdging by your bio., I don't think you have... Maybe you have; I don't know. But if you haven't, you go really deep, when you write. You may not know it, or maybe you do... I don't know. And I love the fact you don't have any, or only a couple typos. Most writers think typos are no big deal, but typos can really change the impact of the story. I've read stories that were really good, but the author has a typo in the word "kiss." It's a lot less dramatic, I have to say...
| Hex Reedglimmer chapter 7 . 8/12/2003
This is good... Must keep reading...
| Hex Reedglimmer chapter 6 . 8/12/2003
Oh, good, something new is coming in...
| Hex Reedglimmer chapter 4 . 8/12/2003
You like using colors to describe, yes?