Reviews for A Dreamer's Sunset
Rhetorics chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
woah, it's so happy... *flinches* no jk. We need happiness with all the depression surrounding us in the world. It's actually not that happy since after reading it, ou know it won't ever happen... (yes, it's my pessimistic nature)
Tree chapter 1 . 11/13/2002

its all good

Great poem as always!
kptroopa1 chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
well, a happy poem, it should go like this:

A killer's sunset

Falling through the darkening night,

By the fog creeping in.

Past the dark shadows of fear,

To the ancient pit of old.

Black dragon black dragon claw me

with teeth as sharp as a bear's

through the fire and past the light

through the spikes and to your death

once again i'll try to kill u

ance again a bad attempt

i hate u so for killing me

on a nightmare of all nightmares.

Toad-Frog chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
Awesome! R&R My work sometime and K/Writing!