|Reviews for Kaleidoscope|
| Summerdazed chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
you're v. gifted with words...
| etherealmoonlight chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
brilliant imagery used here..i wrote a similar poem like this too...good job!
| Rhetorics chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
yes, you did spell that right. Good analogy though, akaleidoscope... I would've never though of that, and yet it's so true. yes... once again, good job!
| Tree chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
You yoshi have powerful feelings...
| judge judy chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
ima too lazy to write for all of the poems, so ima just gonna say it here. first off, i like this one the best. don't noe why, but i do. in my mind it makes sense, which is very surprising. that means it is a compliment. hehe. i thought the last one was cute too. sweet of u to do that for her. hope she sees that. keep on writing the poems. i enjoyed reading them. ur not a bad writer, not that i ever said that. hehe. keep it up and go for it. that doesn't make sense but that's ok. i don't noe what else to say. have fun in skool, since u don't go to mine. remind me to read ur poems everytime u write a new one or most likely, i won't read them, since i can't even remember what i ate for lunch. hehe. i have amnesia. well c ya soon. jal ee ssuh.
| kptroopa1 chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
well well im the first one to comment but im too tired for a masterpiece,, lucky u james
hey, its depressing, and i would just make it a little better, if u know what i mean, oh well