|Reviews for Blue & Black|
| the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Wow... you were really depressed... It's well written, though... It's practically a definition of long term depression.
| fearphobic chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
so i had to comment abt this one...i mean itz jus to good...
but i gotta say this...it sounds more like a song rather than a poem...
| aviatrix chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
my angst-o-meter's going off the charts. it's not so much that i don't like the poem, but that the poem makes me dislike the person it's about.
| Lady Ariel chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
I love the repition.
You have a wonderful way with words, but for some reason it feels as if you're repeating what you heard rather than expressing from the heart. Maybe it's the rhythm? *shrug*
It's still really good.
Is this a song? (Sorry if you said that in the summary)
Good job. :D
Do you write any free-verse? It might sound more heart-felt.
Just being thoughtful.
"The hardest part of life
| Keighan Moureau chapter 1 . 5/6/2003
Love it. I can relate. Sometimes I feel so depressed. Whenever I read your poems, I get tunes in my head(mostly piamo and violin, since I play them). Keep up the great work!
| Yuki Shiro chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
*tear* This is a REALLY depressing poem. It's extremely well written, my sunflower. Something just connects with me about it, and it helps bring my current aged-14 depressive feelings into a new light.
PS: Thanx for R&R-ing Untitled. you might like my newest poem too!