Reviews for Little Heart
the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
The "line" is very deep. Wow. Good poem.
Happy-Platipus chapter 1 . 1/20/2004
Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!
I love these lines:
'Oh don't lie
In the ocean of your pain'
'How else can you live?'
'And know that I've forgiven you...'
'I'll always love you'
You are so amazing! you write such amazing poems! The world is so amazing!
Your poem is so beautiful and true!
Little heart...
weasleygranger not signed in chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
This is just to beautiful , words just can't add up , I love it. Keep writing .


these kids chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
I love the content. The stanza that struck me as the strongest was "Then came that horrible day

Not a minute too late

When you saw that in every way

You’d become the very person you hate..."

I thought that it showed suhc strength in realization and it made me think back on a time where I had done the same thing. I could hear the melody in my head as I read along and that is awesome. keep writing :)
Needa S chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Beautiful! Keep writing!
Deana Bell chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
Oh my Bob this is exactly like what I'm going through right now! This is such an awesome song keep writing! (Thanks for the comfort)

-Jesus Saves-