Reviews for One Journey Ends
Rubedo Jr chapter 12 . 11/20/2004
amazing...can you feel the tension in the air...? I can't wait until I've seen what happens next...so I'll read it
Rubedo Jr chapter 11 . 11/20/2004
I hope that Ben's mother...excuse the language...the bitch...drinks herself to death. It's ignorant people like that that really make my blood boil...speaking of which, you did a great job conveying that bitchism that she has
Rubedo Jr chapter 10 . 11/20/2004
Well, Hendersom is foiled, but Tara isn't doing so well...
Rubedo Jr chapter 9 . 11/20/2004
Hmm..they're getting close. The next chapter should be very intrestig indeed
Rubedo Jr chapter 8 . 11/20/2004
About time! Justin really needed to get that out into the open. Looks like good times...good times...
Klanfer chapter 24 . 11/19/2004
Is this the last chapter in this part of your absolutely smashing story, "One Journey Ends"?I LOVE ITxoxoxta'z luvi
Rubedo Jr chapter 7 . 11/19/2004
Dun dun dun! Drama abound! Justin won't admit he's concerned about Tara, Sven watches Tara from afar, and Tara gets an envelope with her lost necklacs in it. It really captures that soap-opera feel that keeps you intriqued! Good job! I love it!
Wolfie Star26 chapter 24 . 11/19/2004
you have to update this, its not finished cuz u did say in the beginning of this chapter, that there are two more chapters. so please update soon.
Rubedo Jr chapter 6 . 11/18/2004
hmm...this grows more intresting with each chapter...I must continue to read, cause this is great!
Rubedo Jr chapter 5 . 11/18/2004
well, and I thought Sven was heartless...guess not. Will Tara's mental health decline even futher...? Only the next chapter will tell...Onwards!
Rubedo Jr chapter 4 . 11/18/2004
Oh, man...harsh. I'm glad Justin busted that first guy up, though. Afew grammar mistakes, but only small things that I almost missed.
Rubedo Jr chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
ooh...dark...and intresting deveopment as well between Justin and Sven...

Gah! spelling and grammar! gah!
Rubedo Jr chapter 2 . 11/15/2004
whoa...that was horrible! not the story, the parents...disowning their son like that...

I hoppe they have an...unfoprtunate...accident...
Rubedo Jr chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
dun dun dun...
getting a little suspicous now...heh heh heh...

I love intrique...
a person chapter 23 . 3/27/2004
gahh, anxious to find out whats happened to Tara! another great chapter!
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