Interesting. This could be used in Primary or something! Its a nice story!

this story has to be one of the best stories i have ever read on this site, oh wait it is the only story i have read. but i will read more, maybe i should post a story i have a realy good story about a little girl that wears a read hood and walks every where and one day she goes to her grandmas its a realy good story. what do you think? i think i should. this is a rely cool website. i like the color black and green and brown. ok so realy i'm not eisenhower but my name is well you know who i am. and i thought i would read one of your stories and now i typing this cause i am bored. well it was a good story gtg.

I love this. Spoken like a true LDS! _ A wonderful life lesson... _

Well...You certainly know how to get your point across. And you can write, but I can't evaluate the story's content, being an atheist and all. I could see this story being used in a catholic school. It'd work really goos with some illustrations.