I really liked this. You could imagine her feelings and it felt like you were there. Enough detail to be realistic but not voyeuristic. Excellent!

Oh thi si very good also are you japanese or did you just happen to learn it? Only two things that i know are konishiwa and sayonara

i love the description...i love the fact that you gave her a personality...and i like jirou...i just think you did a really great job...

That was good! great! it was sad 4 the happy ending! well done

why is it a japanese girl? why cant it be an american girl? or maybe a korean girl?
just a lil curious thats all

oh my god!you're so good! I love this story. I can personally relate to all your stories...keep up the good work!

good story ... are you going to post all of this on PASS ?

very realistic. unfortunately there aren't very many boys like jirou or parents like satomi's. but still, very good stuff

short good nonetheless.:)

Oh my god, this story is really good. I know a lot about bulimia and I can tell that you do too, because everything in here is very accurate even the red eyes after vomiting. Very, very good. Update soon.

This is turning out really good so far. Kinda (sort of) confusing cause you're using metric...stupid american measuring systems. oi. oh well, keep writing!

Oh my god, Satomi needs to get some new friends. That other girl really didn't like the fact that Satomi spoke better english, did she? If someobody said that to me, I'd pop them in the mouth even if it was true.