|Reviews for HalfLife|
| Just Wolf chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
i loved the idea of yourself being your biggest secret of all. the descriptions were gorgeus. i loved "roccoon smudged mascara eyes". gave me good images! it was a nice, if stark, story.
| Black and Silver Dreamer chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Wow, this is amazing, really. The last few lines just pull it all together, and you really give a good image of what she's like, on the inside and out. All and all a beautiful piece of writing.
| Vuelo chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
This is different. For some reason, i think of like a trailor park... i dont even know why! Its a girl/woman and she's living a bland boring shit life and she pretends to be okay with that, but really inside she dreams of lights and colours and everything but what she has... but nobody knows. I really dont know... but thats what i think! I like it.
| Beau Porteur De Diamant chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
Awesome poem. I especially liked the last line with the "I am my biggest secret of all." You have talent.
| Loganberry chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
I absolutely love the "prism" idea. And "ashes of cigarettes and her soul" is genius. This is really very good stuff indeed... the only problem being that "raccoon mascara" has put an image into my head that I simply cannot get rid of - and I doubt it's the one that was intended! ;)
| reject punk rocker chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
this is also amazingly good. ur writing is real sweet, u should keep it up. its diff from other stuff iv read, urs seems more open...in a way:S and better than mine cas my stuffs just a shitload of spur of the moment crap. to me, my stuffs just reflections of how i feel at the time...if u get me? and i have these freaky lil caracters hehe, called adam and isoble which my band play the songs i wrote to. for now
farewell, god bless AND KEEP WRITING! kerry xxx
| j.e. falton chapter 1 . 11/21/2002
very real. nice job.
| Robin the Jarbog chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
Wow. That's deep.
| Lippy chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
This has a very angsty feel to it. I like it. Is it about you? Or about a character? Or even your bestest friend?