Reviews for Colors of Belief
Lomiel chapter 2 . 5/23/2004
This chapter was VERY confusing for me, but I have a headache right now, so that might be part of it. Anyway, I loved the prologue. You have an amazingly clear and poetic style that's very enjoyable to read. You capture emotion and images very sharply. I liked this a lot. If you post more, I will write another review with improvements when I don't have a headache.
Good on you!
~Shimoyo Lomiel
DelleDelle chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
::Does happy dance:: You know I'll bug you for more, right? Endlessly until it's done...
Aathiya Lia chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Well, it's a little hard to comment as this is but the tip of the iceberg, though there is a promise of high action and adventure to come (most certainly not the tinsel fairytale kind). The best thing about creating one's own universe is the one gets to set all the rules. I'll be checking back on this one. In the meantime, keep pegging away on the re-write *cracks whip* ;)