Reviews for Drink Deep
Arwen Starfire chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
This poem is a beautiful depiction of the results of abuse and of how an abused child feels. Your repition of the lines "Drink deep, drink deeper" moved me deeper and involved me in the story. and I like how you change the perspective in the last stanza and write from first person point of view. You are a powerful poet.
Ellerfru chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
never stop writing!
clifjumpr13 chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
Amazing imagery! The suffering and the loneliness portrayed is very well written. Also, the repition of the line 'Drink deep, drink deeper' was very effective. Well done, come r&r if you have some time.