|Reviews for Friendship Doesn't Always Triumph|
| aPPle-FrrEAk chapter 1 . 1/25/2003
lol...this is probably my Middle-Child-Syndrome(MCS) talking but I agree that the need to belong is great and the resistance of being unloved is even greater. Great poem...you might want to try to add some punctuation(i can NEVER spell that word right lol)to show emotion like exclamtion points and periods separating important words. Just a suggestion(most likely a bad one) Keep writing and posting more!
| rob chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
ffn wouldnt let me log in. very interesting. a tad depressing but its very tgood. your poems ar getting bett with each one you write so keep at it _
| DF103 chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
wow...that was...wow...deep...very deep...well written...lemme know when you write another one...cause your poems are so good...