Reviews for I want to die
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
oh i loved this, tho after the last thing i read from u i should b complaining about what insensitive sick bastards men r. i liked this a lot tho so i cant really. loved it. Twilight
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
Oh... ah! I LOVED IT! I think this is one of (if not THE) favorite of mine out of all of your postings that i've read! IT's GREAT!


I feel like adding some mindless lord of the rings quote so take no heed

I amar prestar aen, han mathon ne nen, han mathon ne chae a han noston ned 'wilith

'The world is changed; I can feel it in the water, I can feel it in the earth, I can smell it in the air.'
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
Very, very nice. I was expecting something else but I ended up loving it. Beautiful poem, very beautiful. (Sorry again for screwing your name up. I remembered this time though!)Keep writing.~CT
yuki kawaii chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Nice! Thanks for the reviews by the way! Ooohhhh... the poem gives me slight creeps...
Tanika chapter 1 . 11/25/2002
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! this was excellent. i loved it to the very core of it. i think lots of the world shall read this before they decide to make a nother sick joke hurting the feelings of the blind. i once had a blind friend he was so dear to me so special and so sweet but cruel people really hurt him so now he is in a shell he wont come out of. look at me talking you to death in this review. keeo up the good work it was really great. and thank you for adding me to your favs list
Elf-Maiden of Mirkwood chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
Hmmm...I suppose I was incorrect in assuming that you are a Christian. This poem really touches upon a place of remorse in my heart, for it reminds me of the despair and folly that people will allow themselves to fall into, believing that there is no hope. It reminds me of Darwin's theory of survival of the fittest. I truly detest that theory, and everything that it encompasses, because it portrays to us the idea that some of us were meant to have wonderful lives and other weren't. I know that the theory is speaking of physical evolutional advantages, but it provides a sort of analogy to the spiritual battle that the blind man seems to be experiencing. I pray that your outlook on life is not the same as your poem expresses. We may live in a fallen world, and life may seem destitute, but I must witness to you in saying that there is hope, and it does not come from some hapless and deceiving religion. It comes from a personal relationship with Jesus Christ, and a journey with Him down the path of light. I'm not one of those people that believes that life is a piece of cake. There are obstacles, but through the grace of God we can all overcome them.
lynx wings chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
Excellent. Really good poetry.
Sonata Night chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
Wow, i love this. Very pretty.