Reviews for Yet another poem
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Hey...wow...this is good, I dunno if I agree with you, this will take some pondering, lol. tihs is harsh...an sometimes I feel like that and sometimes I dont..the bat thing made me laugh tho, lol. but the end bit is great! Lov it! hm...guess who this is?lol, i changed my name (again)..Mia! lol, sry for the confusion, dont ask bout the nu penname, anyway my goal in life is to review all ur poems, lol. But this is really good, Love, Mia
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
McD

wow. okay yeah I always say "wow " but I'm realy in awe. this one just really hit me and i can't really explain why... probably because deep down I don't want to believe that death is death, it's bound to come and you can't fight it once it's started it's death march. well it's good

Kim
Tanika chapter 1 . 11/25/2002
the last line was the best line. i really like it. i am afraid for you though. that people will put this poem down because you dont seem to have faith. but it is still really nice well writeen and straight to the point. great job
quotient chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
Muse over it, you said. Trust me, I'll be musing over it for a while yet. Very nice! I salute you!