Reviews for Nitroglycerin
HoneyPunch chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
I remember reading this yeeeeears ago (2005ish) when I first started reading stuff on FictionPress. I only read about half of it at the time. I found the (relatively) long chapters a bit much in one sitting for my short attention span. I always thought the plot was really interesting though, and for some reason I thought about this story a couple of days ago. I've since read the whole thing and I am so disappointed that I never finished it earlier! I really got into it and was so sad that the last update was in 2005. I hope you read this review and can be proud that you've crafted a story that has stuck with me for so many years.
feudingmind chapter 3 . 10/26/2006
I just read the first 3 chapters of your story and its really good. I was just wondering what's going on. Why do the corpse girls live in a secluded castle ? What are they fightin against or what is their purpose ? Wha's the difference between the corpses and the vamps ?
Queen of Irony chapter 3 . 9/1/2004
I have already reviewed Tod und Zerstörung, and now I am reviewing this. I applaud you, really! This is a wonderfully morbid piece. I love it. I haven't finished it yet, of course, but I will eventually, or as fast as I can. Again, bravo!
Post Script-If I sound like I am being sarcastic, I'm not.
R. Washburn chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
I've been meaning to get around to reading this, since I always found Brooke to be an interesting character while reading Azrael's "Tod und Zerstörung" (as a matter in fact, she was one of my favorites.). Finally while I had the time and effort to do I am. Managed to get through the first chapter with good timing and little trouble.

Good to know that you both like to write long chapters; it was a good read, which makes it even better. I'd have to say you jumped around a lot but it wasn't anything that was too difficult to follow; you made it run right. And it all just sort of came together in one flow together the end. I also see very few grammatical and spelling errors so you did good there, too.

It was funny because I was reading this and thinking of "deja vu". An interesting idea to interlock "Nitroglycerin" and "Tod und Zerstörung" into the same story but different point of views and different writers. Kind of gives me a different perspective on both characters, actually; makes me want to kind of read both at the same time to see how different they are with the character interactions and all. I know I recall some parts. Eh, it's been a while.

Shit. Rambling... Anyway.

Nice introduction. The good old Houdini trick performed by teh Brookis.

As for the characters. A lot of them were introduced in one clump rather quick and soon, but then again I've read a lot of novels that do that, too; so I'm not going to hold anything against that. Each character sort of has their own personality for the most part, so it's not one of those situations where I forget them easily after they're introduced. Giving some ideas on how Brooke lived and what conditions she was living under along with the kind of people she has to deal with was a good idea, too.

By the way...I never did like Meghan (from reading "Tod und Zerstörung", at least.). You did a good job on giving her a very unpleasant aura. Brooke is something else, but that's why I always thought her an interesting character. You have a nice touch with Voice.

Well, I think that's all I can point out for now, or think of saying. I'll be sure to check back every now and again and leave a review chapter-ly like I always do, if it doesn't bother you so much.
amai nozomi chapter 9 . 9/13/2003
omg that was so good! i can't wait to read more! UPDATE!
lucinda chapter 9 . 6/6/2003
you still havent updated i mean how long has it been? please up-date soon!
lucinda chapter 9 . 4/25/2003
you absolutely cant stop! its to good to stop!pleaz pleaz pleaz dont give up!
SailorHeavymetalPapillion chapter 2 . 11/21/2002
This is a great story so far. In fact, the only reason I stopped reading is because I have to go to work in the morning and it's late. But trust me, I will keep reading and giving you reviews!