|Reviews for Heaviness|
| acccountkiller chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
hey, this is really good i can kinda relate to it when i'm feelin depressed sometimes, like everything is just... motionless and it takes such a huge effort to just.. live. lol, and still i laugh, gtg. love and good luck. Twilight
| Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
I love the beginning! absolutely loved it!
| Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
Very nice poem. Kind of inspiring, kind of sad at the end.
Thanks for your reviews. Don't worry, there's only eight characters you really need to worry about. Maybe next time I'll put up a character chart thingy so you know who's who. I think it'll help everyone.
Okay, I'm rambling. Nice poem!
| Tanika chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
wow! very heartfelt. um... is it supposed to rhyme? if it is your rhyme scheme is a bit off. maybe you can look into it... fix it up. other than that great job. vocabulary choice is good. point made ver clear and easy to understand. nice job McD
| Lilliana chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
I feel the exact same way right now. It is amazing that you can express it so clearly. Lil