Reviews for Crash Dive
InnocentlyMysterious chapter 3 . 7/12/2005
this story is soo good so far, and it's so easy to relate to the characters. you write very well, and i'll be looking out for the further updates and chapters. well done, keep it up! i'm faving this baby;)
At least I have a Lamb chapter 3 . 2/17/2004
Interesting...
You should definitely continue this. June is a very interesting character. Is there a story about how she got her name, June? and is that going to be incorporated into the story?
Just a hint; I'm interested in the physical appearance of your characters. Particularly June and Micheal (and Max). Please add that... like "she looked into ther mirror and saw her grey eyes staring back..." (except not as stupid as that!)
hehehehehe...too much chocolate...What is up with all the ! ? So much fun!
Update soon (not abandoning)...now I have to go read the rest of your stories!
Chibi K-chan chapter 3 . 2/25/2003
Love your story! Keep up the good work! Gambette!
sapofbks2008 chapter 3 . 12/4/2002
The story rocks so far. I can't wait for more.
Gloria-Krasy chapter 3 . 12/3/2002
I already love this story. Sometimes Michael gets on my nerves for treating June like this, but it would be really annoying if their relationships were sweeeeeet... There must be something bitter for good story.

Well, that's all for now.
Cassie chapter 3 . 12/1/2002
Ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh! Is Michael and June going to end up falling for each other? I mean most stories do start with two people who hate each other and then it slowly turns into love... lol, anyways, it's good. Keep writing...!
Don't want to chapter 3 . 12/1/2002
good story, keep it up! -
StEvesTimeForLove chapter 3 . 12/1/2002
GREAT STORY! Please write more as soon as you can!:0)
cbprice25 chapter 3 . 11/30/2002
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for the first couple of chapters, but this is so good! I can't wait till I see how it turns out, you'll have to update really soon. If you don't I might die of suspense and you'll loose one reviewer.
kat chapter 3 . 11/30/2002
fantastic start!
theMuse chapter 2 . 11/30/2002
Wow...
theMuse chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
S'okay.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2002
Michael sound so cool! Kinda like a mysterious, proud bad boy... lol, I'm obsessing with your made up character; but he sounds so HOT! I know I'm weird... but I can't help it...!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2002
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH! Me like! more like me love! But anyways, this is a really good start... :)
Cassie chapter 2 . 11/25/2002
This is cool! Please continue... Karla seem cool! Kinda remind me of my sister...
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