Reviews for Love is such a beautiful thing
IHJ chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
Sorry if I don't leave a good review; it's 3:05 a.m. here and I'm starting to get a headache. Urgh.

Well written and the line "underside of love's wings" is truly unique. It made me thinks of swans... The girl is introduced very smoothly. The tone doesn't seem bitter, more of realizing a hard fact of life and what the fluffiness/smile hides.

Well done.

Izzy J.
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
man, u really have something against love. but u show it very well in ur poems. i liked it. tho it dosnt always rhyme. Twilgiht
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
GOOD! I like it a ton!

Sorry this is extremely off topic, but I went to a rennassance festival today and there was a guy dressed up just like LEGOLAS! I DIED! i followed him around for most of the day and pretty much was stalking hime and i got a zillion pictures of him... It was so cool! that just shows that Yep I am obsessed with lotr!

I also wanted to really like thank you, it means alot to me knowing that you always review my stuff, it's comforting to come on and see that someone cares enough to give me their true comments and adive and critisism. Just to let you know...

Kim

( .Hobbit)
Lilliana chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
Yep yep, been there...lol. Great job James! Li
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Very beautiful poem. I loved it, it's original. Keep writing. And thanks for the reviews. I put the next chapter to my story so if you want to check it out, go ahead. Anyway, nice job.~CT
Tanika chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
Good choice or vocabulary. nice job on this peice. very nice job. i like the line about seeing the underside of loves wings. very orginal. great work. keep up the good work. keep writing forever and always
earthstranger chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
unusual, very good line - "the underside of love's wings", so true - love: both beautiful and terrible, yet we'll ignore the terrible every time to get to the beautiful