|Reviews for Diseased Mind|
| starlit blade chapter 2 . 6/19/2004
Shudders. How chillingly pretty, ducks. i think Lilith and your psychopathic side would get along well (Lilith being my darker side). Very good indeed. Even though it was a bit awkward in places.
| Kenya Bloodstone chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
awesome poem lot likeish ones I write ~Kenya~
| NovaKayne chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
I like this. It's nice and dark and morbid. Morbidity is the best thing in the world. Hehehehe...mor-bid-i-teeee...*clears throat* ANYWAY! The only thing I don't like too well is the last two lines...it just doesn't seem right. But that's just one person's opinion and the ranting of a psychopath so, take it or leave it. Check out some of my stuff pleeez... Good job again.
Licia aka Persley Snow
| Karasu Tendo chapter 2 . 11/23/2002
Did I tell you on your journal that I liked these? 'Cause I don't remember. I think the second one's better than the first, but that might just be because I like the last bit: "i took them off a dying man."
*claps for you*
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 2 . 11/23/2002
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
Grrr. Why do you get all the poetry writing talent? This is superb. (And "superb" isn't a word I'm generally comfortable with.)