|Reviews for First Day|
| Anumati chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
You've already heard my two cents on this, so I'll let it be.
And I don't CARE how emotional you got reading Animorphs - you are capable of better fiction than Applegate!
Thank you for gracing us once again with your art.
| Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Nice poem. I like the structure and comparison of the physical manifestition of the room and the emotional. Reminds me of a book called the Poetics of Spaces. Feng shui poetry? Perhaps. Do the two stanza's represent the points of views of two different people, or are they one?
| Whisper to the Water chapter 1 . 11/26/2002
That's all I can say.
| clifjumpr13 chapter 1 . 11/25/2002
Cheerful, isn't it? Can't relate too much, but have been in a sort of similar situation, but that's a bit of a long story, and I won't burden you with it. I like your word choice, especially, though the entire piece is rather good.
Also, thanks for the review...formatting on this site sucks though.
| Pie chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
Liked very much by lori. Very real and can identify with. Lets me see a bit of you i didn't see before. Keep doing this.