Reviews for First Day
Anumati chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
You've already heard my two cents on this, so I'll let it be.

And I don't CARE how emotional you got reading Animorphs - you are capable of better fiction than Applegate!

Thank you for gracing us once again with your art.
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Nice poem. I like the structure and comparison of the physical manifestition of the room and the emotional. Reminds me of a book called the Poetics of Spaces. Feng shui poetry? Perhaps. Do the two stanza's represent the points of views of two different people, or are they one?

Whisper to the Water chapter 1 . 11/26/2002

That's all I can say.
clifjumpr13 chapter 1 . 11/25/2002
Cheerful, isn't it? Can't relate too much, but have been in a sort of similar situation, but that's a bit of a long story, and I won't burden you with it. I like your word choice, especially, though the entire piece is rather good.

Also, thanks for the review...formatting on this site sucks though.
Pie chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
Liked very much by lori. Very real and can identify with. Lets me see a bit of you i didn't see before. Keep doing this.

*the crumpet*