Reviews for Save the President |
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![]() ![]() Hey, This is really good! I'm inspired to write something on this site... I would offer to write a chapter, but I'm not going to. ..That was rude. Oh, well, sorry. tty on , byes ~*FlamingKnight*~ |
![]() ![]() Weird. |
![]() ![]() Hey cool, its still getting weirder. I'm going to have to write a chapter! |
![]() ![]() Hey Elise this is the best chapter so far! U rule Elise! |
![]() ![]() Esther is weird well it is getting crazyer and crazier, but I'll keep reading! |
![]() ![]() this is gettin weird and u need to settle down CHARLOTTE. PPL WILL REVIEW EVENTUALLY LIKE ME WHO HAS TAKEN THIS LONG TO ACTUALLY READ THIS STORY ANYWAYS! |
![]() ![]() Thsi is more interesting than the first chappter, (Sorry beckie) yeah i had better keep reading |
![]() ![]() this is a good start! I 'll keep reading and reviewing. Yeah I think I will. Then I 'll write a chapter and send it too u! |
![]() ![]() Yes, I was sensing inconsistancies, It seems as if you need a really good chapter or two to set things streight... Wow, I can't think of anything to help you out with, dreadfully sorry, really. Gimme a day or two... |
![]() ![]() ![]() evilstrawberry i really like the character flitch. i'm getting scared because i actually understand what is going on (sort of) well any way good story MOUSE THE CONQUOR |
![]() ![]() ![]() evilstrawberry you should get somone to write another chapter and confirm what is actually happening or you could ignore me but whatever it's very good MOUSE THE CONQUOR |
![]() ![]() ![]() the whole thing is realy good, i enjoy all the crazy running around and not knowing whats happening. well ceep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm very interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok well, the story is good, but there are a lot of inconsistencies as u said, but hey, it's fun! I would like to write a chapter,but i'm not sure if i would be able to right now, but i'll email u and give u my address. keep going with the story till then! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe, BIF that was funny. But now i think i'm getting confused with all the agents and double agents and his mum...oh well |