This is beautiful writing. It's as if your in the mind of a stalker. The first paragragh was so cool! It takes you right there with Dark Derek. Please type some more!

I just realized I never reviewed this. I really like it... although I can't remember everything from when i read it... last year? I dunno. I should have read it again b4 reviewing. Oh well, too late now. Great story, mili!

At first I thought he was a of guardian angel.I guess not. Well, she can see him. So I'm guessing he's human.

This is really great. Terrific.

Hope you update soon,

Olorin.

please write more! I want to know why he is so interested in her!

this is a kool story...write more!

i really like this story

it's vague and interesting and pretty

i hope you are continuing it

im sure it will be great

This is dalva agin. I had to change IDs because a very nasty girl has been treating me very badly and she is getting her buddies to help. Anyway, i want to tell you that I really like this story, I've been thinking about it all night. You will add more, right?

Dalva

Wow, this is really good. What is he though? Is he some sort of guardian? What happens? Write more, please, I really love this!