Reviews for Dark Derek
Funkey.Jazz chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
This is beautiful writing. It's as if your in the mind of a stalker. The first paragragh was so cool! It takes you right there with Dark Derek. Please type some more!
Red Masque chapter 1 . 4/7/2003
I just realized I never reviewed this. I really like it... although I can't remember everything from when i read it... last year? I dunno. I should have read it again b4 reviewing. Oh well, too late now. Great story, mili!
Olorin chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
At first I thought he was a of guardian angel.I guess not. Well, she can see him. So I'm guessing he's human.

This is really great. Terrific.

Hope you update soon,

HereComesTheSun chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
please write more! I want to know why he is so interested in her!
iluvtvb chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
this is a kool story...write more!
wingless chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
i really like this story

it's vague and interesting and pretty

i hope you are continuing it

im sure it will be great
Anna Vashdalal chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
This is dalva agin. I had to change IDs because a very nasty girl has been treating me very badly and she is getting her buddies to help. Anyway, i want to tell you that I really like this story, I've been thinking about it all night. You will add more, right?

Lippy chapter 1 . 11/21/2002
Wow, this is really good. What is he though? Is he some sort of guardian? What happens? Write more, please, I really love this!