Reviews for Caught in the Act
Madness22 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Very good, but certain things were said too much. (like using lover a little much) Find ways to change that , the details were good and the intensity and emotion was very strong. I like _
LiL Angel with Wings chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
i liked it. good job!
aloe vera chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
th woz so HOT! plz plz plz plz plz write more...i really wanna read more...wish i could write like th , hon...are u speaking from experience? come on...u can tell me... ;-)

lotsa luv...

SKYLAR!
anon chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
nice, but you said "Her lover" way to much.
Snowbird1 chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
Cool, nice that she woke up. -
LadyCaramel1 chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
I like your story.

Are you gonna add anymore to it?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!