|Reviews for Footsteps In The Sand|
| Ryyne chapter 1 . 12/3/2002
interesting...i wrote something somewhat similar to this once. great job, your poems really show what's in your heart.
| broken wings241 chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
I like this... our Senior's had their graduation mass last week and ever since then I've been mulling over what it will be like when I leave... this sought of fits in with that, because my friends are sought of like the ones leading me and when we finish school it'll be like I suddenly have to walk all by myself... enough about me, I'm adding this to my favourites! I luv it _!
| InkedinSin chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
interesting...strange flow because lines that rhyme change their order...it'll look better, and easier to read if it had some kind of punctuations...but it's a personal thing. Anyways..the poem is good.