Reviews for Amazing Self Control |
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![]() ![]() Amazing lemon. Made me sooooooo wet. |
![]() ![]() *Laughing out Loud* That did suck didnt It but back to the point it really is moving on at a 'just' pace |
![]() ![]() This should be Interesting**Sly Grin** |
![]() ![]() *Thumbs Up*, I really like this story and hope it turns out to be more then some simply lemon story, not that it bothers me but you know. Anyways dig the intro and cant wait 2 see what happens next |
![]() ![]() um it would be good to use quotation marks, and thats my only critique. It strangely remnded me of harry potter. With ron's little sister ginny, and how harry liked her. So i liked that a lot since i'm obsessed with the H.P SERIES. so awesome story. THUMBS UP |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story - I was hard the entire time, and that's something you should be proud of. |
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![]() ![]() Three things... 1. WHAT? YOU'RE NOT WRITING MORE? HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US? 2. WHAT? YOU MANAGED TO WRITE ALL THIS SO ACCURATELY FROM A MALE'S POV AND YOU'RE A GIRL? HOW DO YOU KNOW ALL THIS? 3. WHAT? YOU'RE NOT WRITING MORE? HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US? Keep writing (please?)! |
![]() ![]() Horrible? What do you mean, horrible? THAT WAS GREAT! |
![]() ![]() Oh... twist! Zesty! LOVE IT! A well-written lemon! That's a first! LOVE IT! (did I mention I love it?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this not inspiration? OMG, loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, this is good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that this was meant to be satirically bad. No emotions, minimal plot. This piece is a compilation of repugnant words, and terrible imagery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! keep it up and write more, plez! |